掲示板 Forums - Does anyone enjoy poetry?

Yeah, it can be hard

But there's still one Being we can always trust: God

THE SAME is with me too...but none of MY FRIENDS ARE THAT WAY ( except familys)...I always do the best and my friends best are the least..why is the world like this..
When a person is loved, that person must also bear the risk of being hated

Oh my gosh same I feel you

If someone gives me a topic then I can make a poem about it. (Not that they are the best.)

I am so lazy lol

This is a Freestyle poem with no intention of rhyming that I made: (I feel I can speak my soul more without the burden of rhyming personally) not that I can speak my soul well lol as you've probably already guessed

Thats why I'm in hell:

Wrath sent me to hell,

Curved hand leading me on,

To the place I never thought I would be,

Demons swaying, prayers leaping,

Blows sending me into the dark,

That's why I'm in hell.

I never thought void sent you to hell,

I guess I can't live without you,

After your heat, after your shade,

I wanted to watch your shadow fade,

To watch the memories, to relive the heat,

To be tucked under your chin,

After your hand, after the retraction,

I thought we had it steady, me and him

Wrath sent me,

Void sent me,

I wanted to watch our shadow fade,

After running, I don't think I could,

That's why I'm in hell.

I couldn't get the heat,

I couldn't get the shade,

Not without him,

That's why I'm in hell.

ahh why am I getting the vibes of a love sooong? sorry guys bad poem I know.. (also, being in hell is metaphoric please don't take this personally)

It's not bad, and they do not suck you gotta believe in yourself more! Seriously, your words are so poetic (for lack of a better adjective ) I love how some of the things you talk about in your poems are mentioned in such an abstract way I struggle with doing that please keep writing because you will only keep improving. I already love your style

I went looking for a poem of mine, and was only able to find one from years ago your poems are all deep, but mine… well, just read it

The Banana

Yellow and curved

Like a bright moon at dark

His stem had hardened

Like a tough oak tree’s bark

I peeled off his skin

He looked rather nude

I took a bite of him

Which he thought was quite rude

So I said I was sorry

He said it was fine

I said I was hungry

He said I could dine

So I ate up the rest

And he tasted the best

Sometimes I love my past self

Here's a poem I finished today don't know what to call it but that's okay I rhymed

Your memory grows faint within my mind
I always find it hard to find the time
To think of you
But when I do
It only makes me cry.

Tried desperately to make you want to stay--
No matter what I did, you found a way
To say goodbye
And let me die
In memories I wish I'd burned.

Only a fool would love you like I do
After all the hurt you put me through;
Please don't forget
The way I let
You leave me for a better life.

Woah, that is so good! I loved the line, "In memories I wish I'd burned." Your poems are so deep and omigosh I can't find the words to express how meaningful those are. So good omigosh I wish I could dig deep to find something like that.

Ahhh Mimi thank you so much

Hi there! I love reading and writing poetry, and I was wondering if anyone else here does too poems are a great way for me to write about emotions that I don't know how to express otherwise. If anyone would like to see some of my poems, I'm happy to share

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